Learning intention - to write a powerful recount based on a personal camp experience.
Things to think about when writing
- Use a variety of sentence starters
- Use paragraphs
- Include powerful verbs, adjectives, similes and personification
- Remember to show don't tell eg I was cold - My body look like it was turning blue and my lips began to chatter.
- To include description of feelings
Use your planning sheets, check list and assessment rubric. These should be glued in your writing book.
Choose 1 event from camp and write about it in clear detail.
Final edited recount due on Wednesday 16th March
4 comments:
Hi mrs Cooper
I've finished recout
what date was camp?
Shanae's recount was really good
I really enjoyed it also
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